The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful, vulnerable and TRUE!
Just one suggestion:
Spaces between paragraphs make it easier to read.
Blessings
You have a great message here. I can feel your passion as I read this piece. In the beginning, there were a lot of questions to yourself. I enjoyed a few, but then it started to lost my interest just a bit. At one point you had three in a row. Mixing up sentence structure is a great way to pull the reader in. I could definitely relate to many of the questions. And they are thought-provoking ones too. Make sure you put Bible verses in quotation marks and add a footnote to show what translation you are using. You did an excellent job. You were spot on topic, picked great verses to prove your point, and delivered a powerful message. I truly enjoyed it.