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Wonderful use of the topic. Blessings
Telling again of Bible stories is always good. Good thoughts on Michal's attitude.

The elder son is mentioned at the beginning of the article. I thought he deserved more attention than the prodigal son -- comparing himself to his brother, feeling sorry for himself, etc.

Who is your audience? People unfamiliar with the Bible, or long time committed Christians? Keep that in mind as you write.

Keep writing.