The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/23
Great job describing all the emotions! I hope this places well!
03/19/23
Thank you for this peek into the life of a military mom. You portrayed your emotional journey well. Just one small suggestion more white space (shorter paragraphs, a space between them) would be more inviting to the reader.

Other than great job. I enjoyed it.
Well these eyes are holding water too.
Wonderful story, beautifully written.
03/24/23
Well done. I got a feel for what you were going through.