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All beautiful truths. May we all learn to magnify!!
I liked the paragraphs pulling together all the people who praised God.
The ideal length of a title is 3-5 words.
The first half was mainly a rewording of Bible verses. If your audience is Christians, these verses will be very familiar and therefore unnecessary. If your audience is not Christians, the whole theme needs to change to why it is necessary.
The last paragraph came off sounding preachy.
Keep writing.
03/14/23
You did a lot of research!
I can definitely feel your passion and desire to spread the Word to others. You have a lot of Bible verses here. It can be a bit distracting to have so many sources. Instead you might want to focus on one piece of Scripture and retell it in your own words. Other than your last line or two, you really didn't make the topic words the main theme. It needs to be central to the article. I'd urge you to read some of the Masters level entries and see the different ways people build the article around the topic words. You did a lot of research and with some tweaking I could see this being used as part of a sermon or Bible study. Keep writing and reading other entries. I look forward to reading more of your work.