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02/14/23
You speak the truth.

To bring this to life and sound less preachy, it would be interesting to have real-life incidents that correlates with the verses.

Show about incidents in your life, or someone else's that put those verses into action.
02/14/23
You speak the truth.

To bring this to life and sound less preachy, it would be interesting to have real-life incidents that correlates with the verses.

Show about incidents in your life, or someone else's that put those verses into action.
A good review of Bible truths. You used a lot of references, necessary for non-fiction. The story does not use "you" a lot, so that helped in not being preachy.
The ideal length for a title is 3-5 words. Think about shortening it.
All the scripture references slowed me down. 750 words is not much to work with. Your words would have been more effective with just the reference rather than exact wording.
02/16/23
Enjoyed this, well done.
God Bless~