The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this piece. I think you did a fine job of retelling it. It could be tightened a little, but overall you did a great job of writing on topic and had a clear Christian message.
09/14/21
You wrote a good bible study with a timely message.

A bit of red ink.
You wrote:
Scripture tells us the king was greatly distresses.

I think you meant distressed.
Minor typo. I do it often.

Proof proof and proof again.

The few times that I am compelled to submit an entry, it's a labor of love that I literally work on for the entire week, printing it out rearranging it, reading it out loud, printing ad nauseum.

Upon hitting the submit button I breathe out a huge sigh of relief and scold myself for allowing it to be so difficult.



This is a great example of a rash promise.
The impact was profound.
Good reminder that promises are very serious. Thank you.