The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for this encouraging piece. I thought it was well written and thoughts flowed well.
09/12/21
This entry is a good ice breaker for a Bible study group. Much healing will flow from a sincere discussion about God's promises in a safe and secure environment. Keep writing.
09/13/21
You mention in this well-written entry about how we wait and wait for some promises to be fulfilled. The wonderful thing is that God does things in His timing and we need to be patient in waiting for Him. I enjoyed this very much. I think this would be a good article for a Bible study. Blessings!
09/14/21
I really enjoyed reading your encouraging entry.

It accomplished a much needed hug from God.

Thank you.
This is a thoughtful piece. The beginning drew me in right away. I'm not a big fan of switching from first person (both singular and plural and back again) to third to second. I enjoyed the first person singular voice the most, but when you switched to asking the reader (me) questions, it made me uncomfortable, almost like I was eavesdropping on another conversation; at times I felt excluded entirely when the you scenario did not match up with me. For me, it would have been more powerful if you had stayed in first person and perhaps shared when you waited for God to fulfill a promise. You did a nice job of writing on topic. I liked the Scriptures you selected to pair with the message and the prayer was powerful, heartfelt, and my favorite part.
09/15/21
Awesome writing and insight. God bless you for this... I needed it.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 17 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
09/20/21
This piece has lifted my hope on a promise God has made to me. I have doubted, questioned and moaned over my waiting. I realize that God is not going to provide me with His blessing until I am ready.

I have often missed the big picture.
God’s timing is perfect.

Isaiah 55:11 is a great reminder of God’s promise.

Your essay held my interest from start to finish.

Congrats on placing first in this challenge.