The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/21
I would encourage you NOT to close your door. You have a lot to offer. I love your take on the challenge this week. You display the love of Jesus throughout your entry and I enjoyed it thoroughly. The only thing I would mention is your spacing. At the bottom of the entry form is a space where you can click on "Preview." I would suggest you do that and then look at your entry and see what it looks like. From there, you can make any corrections. I do not think the spacing takes away from your fine writing. Just a suggestion. Blessings!
08/28/21
Beautiful testimony and witness for the LORD. Well written and in the offering a powerful message.

From your brief message within this entry, I doubt God will allow you to shut the door. And based on your wrap up, I don't think you want to close it either!

God bless you both~
I really enjoyed the opening paragraph. It pulled me in immediately and I was touched by the little boy. I'd love to know more about him. It's discouraged to include the definition of the topic in your article. Instead, show what it means. I did like the definition of what it means to your faith though. I also liked your ending. We all get discouraged and think about giving up, but God has someone to knock at just the right time. This ending brought your story full circle.
09/01/21
I love your story and your writing. How you start and end your story.