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Thank you for your testimony and the message of God's faithfulness.
03/16/21
God is good. I wish we were at all times wise enough to see and hear God's instructions and by pass many of these relational problems. I have never liked that Hagar was sent away. Seems cold to me. BUT, God knew these two women would be competitional and that atmosphere in a home is bad news. I feel the same way about BAD marriage relationships, not God's choice, but space between is the best of the B type plans. Thank you for sharing your testimony.
It is wonderful that God will meet us wherever we are in our time of need when we cry out to him.
You did a nice job of retelling the story and connecting it to life today. I enjoy pieces like this that make me think. Don't be afraid to add dialog, thoughts, and body language. It's a great way to create biblical fiction based on Scripture that will pop and pull the reader in even more. You did a great job of writing on topic too. Congratulations on ranking 7th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.