The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/20
Good story. Flowed well.
Your piece was well-written. However, pay a bit more attention to punctuation, and you will be a wonderful writer!
04/12/20
I loved this story! Well done.
04/13/20
I easily got into your story having worked many years with that age group. I would like to have met Alex a little earlier in the story and seen her reaction or lack of interaction with some of the girls as they came in.
04/15/20
Great job!
Blessings~
I enjoyed it. Well done.