The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/19
I had to smile at this slice of life - with 5 kids born in the 1990s and one 2000, I get the hectic pace of life. I too am now an ouma (well they call me nana but if we lived in South Africa I'm sure it would be ouma), and I see how things have changed - no more lunches, no more school runs. I am thankful for those days. There is no shame in being busy, or in being still. God praises both in His Word.
08/23/19
Whew! I'm tired reading this! Just a suggestion, it would have been easier for me to read had you put white space between your paragraphs. Your quiver is full, and it seems you are greatly blessed by God.
08/24/19
This piece shows a little bit of your thought process, and I was charmed by it. "God inhabits the praise of his people" sounds so poetic, and now I want to understand the deeper meaning of it. It's awesome when you write something that makes people think. Your story did just that.