The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/19
Amen!

Powerful and well done!

Blessings~
02/23/19
Beautifully written and felt like kind and inspiring encouragement - lovely.
02/23/19
You've covered a lot of territory here! This would have been much easier to read and process the information had you broken up the paragraphs. White space is a good thing!
02/24/19
Meaty content, but the reader needs time to chew. Putting space between paragraphs helps that process. I suggest taking advantage of the preview opportunity before submitting your piece. Your meat is worth preparing it just right:-).
02/28/19
Isn't it wonderful we are victors in Christ through his shed blood on the cross and resurrection and defeat over death.
02/28/19
Positive, meaty message, but I echo the suggestion of breaking it into bite-size chunks by allowing more spacing between your paragraphs.