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Topic: AMAZING (04/19/18)
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TITLE: My God | Previous Challenge Entry
By Darlene Casino
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
So vital in all that I do-
He’s my strength, my hope for tomorrow,
He teaches me what is true.
He’s taken away all my sins
Washed me as clean as the snow-
Revealing the Father to me
And all that He wants me to know.
…He’s Remarkable!
He opens my eyes every day
To wondrous sights and sounds-
And to the songs of praise birds sing
The beauty of creation rebounds.
He’s given me eyes to see
Ears to hear sweet words He speaks-
I smell the perfume of nature
I touch, I feel and perceive.
…He’s Astonishing!
I watch storms as they rant and rage
Waves cast ashore by His hand-
The winds whipping all objects aside
There’s much power at His command.
I’ve been on a high mountaintop
And seen all else so far below-
Other peaks, even clouds wafting by
I’m struck with wonder; His Majesty is shown.
…He’s Astounding!
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I wonder if the word abound might be more fitting, than rebound?
The last four stanzas did not paint a very clear picture for me, nor did it seem to flow well.
You did an AMAZING job!