The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/16
Your introduction built the tension very well, before you nailed the point. After all, why pray when you can worry???? Good work
11/20/16
I really liked your story. Nine "at the tones" was beginning to be a bit monotonous to me but it paid off in the end. Great message, well done.
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