The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/16
I liked the analogy between a credit card and our debt of sin. I pondered quite a bit about the thoughts expressed in this piece.
03/04/16
Wonderful, creative and fresh.

well done.


Blessings~
03/08/16
Interesting observations. Sometimes I wasn't sure when I was reading about a real credit card or when it was about God. Also a good proofreading should be done before transmitting as I noticed incorrect verbs, omitted words etc.