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What you have is well written with lots of emotion but we readers need more of a conclusion - what had she done or what what was her problem?
11/10/15
Well written about a situation brought on by a wrong choice. Thankfully the story has a positive note, allowing the Lord to take charge, whatever the cost.
11/11/15
Your story is very clear and well expressed. The feelings were there as you described the situation. Good Job!