The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the sentence, "A Father's heart... and now to orchestrate the events that lead to the fullfilment of a hidden dream.
12/13/05
Lovely testimony.
12/14/05
There are a few errors in tense and punctuation here, but they are overshadowed by the wonderful storytelling. I love it when I learn about another culture, and you did a good job of drawing me in.