The Official Writing Challenge
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Hi,
Just loved the metaphor! You extended it and used it in a couple of different ways that made me feel that I wasn't the only one who runs 'off the pattern,' which is encouraging.
The only bit of red ink that I would give is that I think you used the word 'fold' a few too many times. It became a bit too much like you were battering me with the word if you know what I mean?
Other than that, just loved it. Shalom
10/16/15
Enjoyed this and was thinking with a few changes it could be used for a devotional. Well done, and kept my interest.
10/18/15
Well written devotional. It gave me a lot to think about.

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