The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/15
Powerfully written and expressed! I loved this. I hope it gets the judges attention.

God bless~
05/08/15
Great - so true.
You did a nice job of capturing the topic. Spending time in prayer is vital, but like you mentioned, so easy to excuse the time away.

I noticed a couple of times that you switched from the first person (I) to the universal you. It distracted me slightly, but is so easy to do.

I liked the Bible verse you used. It backed up the wonderful message nicely. Your ending left me with a warm feeling and it brought your piece full circle. Nice job.