The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/15
Beautiful proliferation of scriptural scenarios and of faith overall. Well done!

God bless~
03/05/15
Beautiful proliferation of scriptural scenarios and of faith overall. Well done!

God bless~
03/05/15
Beautiful proliferation of scriptural scenarios and of faith overall. Well done!

God bless~
03/05/15
I apologize profusely for the triple post! I don't know how that happened...sorry.

God bless~
03/09/15
Contents of your article, the message is beautiful... enjoyed it very much. I'm not sure if it is ok to leave some corrections that I thought may be helpful... I hope you receive them with the love that is intended. I am learning too and desire for people to help me where I need it. I am figuring you are maybe like me and write at the last minute, sometimes not leaving time to proofread. I am trying to discipline myself more and start earlier than Weds. afternoons! lol

Where you wrote:
Old T. it (wasn't) until the Christ
faith in (God's) word
lived among us (as) His Son
villagers, He could (not) do any great
our (confidence) in what one (says)
hope (in) the word of God
a few commas would help while reading this too....
If you are thinking "who does she thinks she is" please forgive me... I realize that what you meant in each case is obvious... and right on, just encouraging you with the same thing I need, (discipline to proofread.)
There are so many things I can't understand yet with the punctuation and capitalization,etc. I welcome your help on any of my writings. Blessings and Thank You for your article on Faith. It was beautiful.
03/10/15
You have a lot of great thoughts on faith contained in this meaningful devotion. I think you would find it really helpful to read your piece out loud to yourself to catch those little omissions or mistakes in vocabulary - also someone else might be willing to proof read it for you and offer helpful suggestions.