The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/15
This was a great story and showed that sometimes we have to blindly follow and be obedient to what the Lord has in store for us. Great dialogue and interaction with believable circumstances.

well done!

God bless~
03/09/15
I agree totally with C D Swanson! Thank you for your example of blind faith and "moving" forward, literally!
This is a great story. I could relate to your characters and experiences. I liked how you used dialog to move the story along. Instead of taglines like he said or she quipped use those spots to show emotion or personality. For example: She crossed her arms and pushed out her lower lip. "I don't want to move." You really showcased the topic throughout the story. It's a great message and you did a nice job of pulling me into the story.

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