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Very powerful article. This is so very true! This needs to be sent to alternative media sites that will boldly post it for others to read. Messages like this are being stifled by the main stream today.

One thing that would make for easier reading is to break down the article into smaller paragraphs.

Thank you for sharing this and I hope it gets out on the web in many places.

God bless~
02/14/14
Deep and prolific commentary, excellent job!

God bless~
Although I agree with your perspective, your presentation of the information seemed to resonate with a confrontational flare. I would be curious to know if your goal of the writing is to sway opinion away from humanism or to further create division in our society. As a Christian, I am reminded of I Cor. 13, "Love is patient, Love is kind.." I hear the passion in your words but I believe in order to reach the people you may hope to reach, filtering the passion into facts that support your ideas may be more productive. However, if your goal is to be confrontational, your writing presents in an extremely educated manner. You have a brilliant ability to utilize language and powerfully present your view.
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