The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/05
I wonder if this would have a better "flow" if it were organized differently: write about the bad odors, then do the spiritual application, then write about the sweet odors, and that application. By the way, I could practically smell them as you wrote: great descriptions.
11/02/05
I've met a few "noxious" people! Hopefully the scent of Jesus Christ on us will cause them to seek a sweeter fragrance with which to douse themselves! Thanks for a well written article:)
11/04/05
A little work on structure and organization and you have a winner. Lots of good information, a little low on transitions; but a nice thought. Thanks
11/04/05
I like the fact that we all have a purpose. I agree with the above. Nice job! God bless ya, littlelight