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TITLE: The Flames Within Me | Previous Challenge Entry
By Steven Kellen
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One thing that would make the journey easier - spacing. Break your thoughts into smaller paragraphs and double space between paragraphs.
It's easier on the eye and separates the thoughts so that the reader can linger a little longer on each one.
Well done and keep writing - not that it sounds like you have a choice! :)