The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/08
Little children have such a hard time getting aunts and grandmothers straightened out. A sweet story.
04/26/08
This is a very sweet story. I love the descriptions of the activities of the little boy and the woman. Good job.
Laury
04/27/08
I too liked the descriptions, especially the card houses. Don't be afraid to use your 750 words, there seems to be more that needs to be said in this story.