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11/08/07
I like your title very much, and your piece is very well-written.

Unfortunately, as a big city girl, freedom is a bit over-preached where I live. Sometimes, so much so, that one cannot even tell the difference between a Christian and a non-Christian.

However, your point is to teach about TRUE, godly freedom in Christ. If that is received accurately, His releasing of our shackles most definitely leads to a life of change. Good job!
11/14/07
The Good News is the gospel and should be shared with everyone. To have forgiveness, we must first realize our guilt for we are all sinners and fall short of the Glory of God. But when we come to Him with repentant heart He will forgive our sins and save us from the pits of Hell.
This is a very well formatted write with a good message...I would like to see you expound on it a bit more and maybe include the "fear" meaning reverence of God.

God Bless