The Official Writing Challenge
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A beautiful transformation.
Well done.
09/09/07
Had a very interesting start the 2nd paragraph was at first misleading then after reading the last paragraph I got the 2nd paragragh. This needs to be expanded because you really do have something here, but it ended to abruptly. I would have said Good Job! if you had given just a little more.