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Topic: Write in the ROMANCE genre (04/19/07)
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TITLE: Love waits... | Previous Challenge Entry
By Misti Chancellor
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Slipping quietly from the room, she made her way down the hall to her bedroom. She changed into her nightgown and crawled into bed. Nighttime was the hardest time; the memories, hopes, fears, dreams all pressed on her then. She leaned back wearily against the pillows, fighting against the tears. “Lord, I don’t understand. He promised he would be back for Jason’s first birthday party. He was only supposed to be gone a week. What happened?” She stared into the dark silence for a long time. The tears dried on her cheeks as she fell asleep, hugging a pillow.
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He ran shaky fingers through his thinning brown hair, and then cradled his head in his hands. She’d probably given up on him by now. Had it really been two years? Tears dripped between his fingers, landing with wet plops on the dusty wood floor. Frustrated, he wiped his eyes with his sleeve and got up to pace the small room that had been his prison for the last two years.
It had been his misfortune to stumble onto his boss’s nefarious embezzlement scheme. His boss sent him away on a trip; he’d been kidnapped and brought here not long after he’d left town. After two weeks, hope of rescue died. He didn’t understand why no one was looking for him. Had his boss fabricated a story to explain the disappearance of one of his employees? Would Jenna wait for him?
If only he could find a way out of this place! He collapsed onto the rickety bed and stared up at the ceiling, feeling defeated. He’d tried so many times to escape, but to no avail. What made him think that THIS time he’d find a way to be successful? Rolling over, he buried his face in the thin cotton pillow, and began to pour out his agony to the Lord. Surely God could make SOME way for him to get home to his wife and little boy. He missed them dreadfully!
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“Jenna, honey, it’s been two years. You don’t honestly think he’s still alive, do you?” her mother queried. “Mr. Graham has been so kind to you and Jason; can’t you just give him a chance? He’s been so good to help out since Jared’s been gone. That’s not something most employers would do. He’s gone so far beyond what was required of him.”
“I just can’t, Mother. When I lay there at night, I see Jared’s face, his big beautiful brown eyes pleading with me to wait for him, to hold onto hope, to be faithful to the promise I made to him. Don’t you see, Mother? Love waits… love hopes… love endures… and one of these days, love will triumph! I just know it! Last night I prayed God would bring him home… I dreamed that Jared and I were sitting on the porch swing with Jason, watching the sun set. I have peace about it, Mother. I KNOW he’ll be home again someday!” And turning, Jenna left the room to find Jason.
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Jenna ambled behind Jason as he ran giggling up the path chasing a brilliant orange butterfly, dreaming of the times she and Jared had walked together on this same path, enjoying the spring evenings. She was jarred from her reverie by the sound of a collision. Jason, in his enthusiastic attempt to catch the butterfly, hadn’t watched where he was going and had nearly bowled the tall, thin, balding man over. She hurried over to them, intent on apologizing. “I am SO sorry… he wasn’t watching where he was going… are you alright?”
“Jenna…” She looked up and got lost in his big brown eyes. Tears rolled down her cheeks as she realized that love had triumphed! Jared was home!
As they walked arm-in-arm back down the path toward the house, Jared told Jenna about his capture, his confinement, his escape, and Mr. Graham’s subsequent arrest. They settled onto the porch swing, Jason cradled between them, to enjoy the sunset, with hearts full of contentment, thankfulness, joy and love. God was so good!
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Nice job.