The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/07
I enjoyed the updating of the parable--had a nice aha! moment when I recognized it. I don't think you need the bedtime scene at the end at all, it's effective without it and it's a pretty sudden direction change.

Fun way to modernize the familiar story!
Interesting example of the parable of the talents. A new approach. Good job.