The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/06
This is an excellently written and very lovely poem. What a wonderful cry from a believer's heart. Good job.
12/05/06
Lovely poem showing that we volunteer for Him because He first volunteered for us! :)

It touched my heart with its message of giving and submitting!
12/05/06
I love the comparison between our volunteering and His. This is so heartfelt and meaningful. This truly touched me!