The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/06
This poem is very interesting--lots of near-rhymes and near-rhythms. I suspect that's intentional, and after a second reading, I think I like it. It's definitely out of the ordinary, and thought-provoking.
10/20/06
An unusual poem indeed.
10/24/06
An excellent word picture! Well done! Thanks for sharing this!