The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/05
Very informative - your passion for the article certainly shows. However, explaining the word shrewd is not necessary; it's meaning already known to your readers.

Save your valuable words for showing, not telling, (something I still sometimes struggle with).

Many people were covered in your article; perhaps by picking just one you can create a story of "showing" how that one particular character was shrewd. This actions you create for him in the story will highlight his shrewdness. Otherwise, very nicely written. :) Thank you for the mini bible lesson!

Blessings, Joanne
I enjoyed the knowledge implanted here. Especially in showing Jesus in this light as we sometimes forget his human qualities while reading about miracles. He had to think on his feet at all times didn't he? Nice read
Nicely written. You couldn't have explained the word "Shrewdness" any better.