The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/06
You have shared some wonderful advice in this article. Although I don't feel that I have lost the ability to rest, I do often need to be reminded to do so which you have just done so very well. I loved the little boy singing which very effectively illustrated your point. I also liked how you set apart "Time...", but I think it would be more effective as a short sentence. The following is so true: "How many...pleas for help would I hear." Also, to "Listen with my heart" is an important message. I really enjoyed reading this.