The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/06
Great story! great writing. The office scene was written very realistically. I noticed a period was forgotten after delay. (You probably saw it after submitting!:)) anyways...good ending, nice dialogue and good pace along with a great reminder to us all. I also like the opening paragraph as it caught my atttention immediately.