The Official Writing Challenge
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I like your work here. It's a bit depressing, but it has value. I especially like how you mention that humans like to put things out of our minds hoping they won't happen. Very true, and pointless.

There a was a typo or two ("there" last should be their).

I would've like to have seen this fleshed out more. Perhaps adding some personal touches here and there, or adding a fictional element(s) for examples.

Still, you've done a good job. Keep it up.