The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/06
You have some beautiful and serene images here...very nice. A suggestion: try to replace common phrases (God sized hole, shelter of your wings, built on sold rock) with fresh and unique word choices.

I especially liked your second stanza.
06/09/06
Good images, and it really conveyed the feeling of peace.
06/14/06
I love how you've given your free verse it's own lyrical rhythm. It just flows - from your pen to my heart. Great job!
You could definitely feel the peace portrayed in this peace. good job.