The Official Writing Challenge
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Great start..The end was a little forced. A neat way to look at the joy of life.
05/27/06
I enjoed this, but I felt the ride was too short. I bet there were more rooms to learn more lessons. Joy through pain? Joy vs happiness? Well done
05/29/06
A very unique story. thank you. It also sounds like a good out reach tool a church could invest in to minister to thier community with at the county fair. God Bless.
05/31/06
An excellent idea and good writing. Please keep it up!