The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this. I felt you really fot me into her head, and I cared about whether she 'makes it' or not. Good stuff
What a marvelous voice your narrator has! Witty and a bit ironic, very likeable. I wonder if there's a computer glitch giving your entry such a strange "format," because I'm afraid it may cause some people to by-pass this gem and miss it. PM me if you'd like a brief tutorial on formatting, previewing, submitting...this is a very, very good piece.
What a marvelous, interesting character! I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks!