The Official Writing Challenge
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Awesome! I'm a firm believer in waht yo ushared in this article. This would be good as a Bible study or word study.
03/16/06
You make several very good points here--but as a consequence, it lacks focus. This has enough good material to be 2 or 3 good articles, with much truth. Keep writing!
03/16/06
I think I'm with Jan here. The risk is of mixing the metaphor if you try to make more than one main point. But some great stuff, and a real challenge. Thank you.
03/16/06
The use of wacko and psycho doesn't seem to fit into this story very well. You use words nicely (snuggled up inside our four walls) and give a sense of seeing what it written.