The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/06
Great poem. I loved the off-beat rhyming sequences. I liked the third stanza the most - it would stand as a very poignant poem all by itself.
02/28/06
I really don't know much about poetry, and I must confess that usually I don't care for reading it all too much...But I did really like this poem, and I'm glad that I took the time to read it. :) It makes me think that maybe I should start reading more. ;)
03/02/06
I liked this one, almost read like something I would write :) Good job.