The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/06
Really well written. I liked how you made his feelings come alive.
02/21/06
Interesting perspective. Well done.
02/22/06
Beautifully done, I loved it all--but the title didn't seem to fit; it was a bit of an anachronism. Otherwise, absolutely wonderful.