The Official Writing Challenge
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Your last paragraph is great! You had a few run-ons and a typo or two, but this is a story I could really relate to--I hate the cold, too! Nice job.
How very clever to build a story about relationship around "a three dog night". Very nicely done.
Interesting story, well told. I shivered as I read it. We hope to visit Alaska next summer. Note, that was summer, not winter.... Your writing drew me right in. I felt like I was there.
I hear Alaska is really awesome, but I am not very well adapted to cold. Very nice story, enjoyed the end thoughts. I knew what the "three dog night" meant--still I liked the way you applied it to not being replaced by another, and growing cold. God bless ya, littlelight
Title drew me in - and glad it did - I enjoyed the read. (And secondly...) Thanks for stopping by my "Musings..." this week on made my day! (*.*)!