The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/25
I enjoyed reading this. You made some great points and drew the theme together successfully in the last paragraph. God’s word is precious and you remind us how important it is. Blessings
You make some great points in this essay. I liked your selection of Bible verses too. Look back and see how many times you repeated words. I think you'll be surprised. Some tightening of the lines would help that. You nid a nice job of writing on topic and delivered a powerful message.
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06/19/25
I really liked this Truth you described. "The word of God provides nourishment for the soil of our heart; if we let it penetrate deeply."

How true and thank you for all the Truth you included in your piece.