The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 616 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
So many good points here.
Blessings
11/01/24
This is a very uplifting piece. It blessed me! Just a small note, Bible should have a capital B. I like your style of writing and look forward to reading more from you.
11/01/24
You make some really good points and use some really good phrases e.g. “Sin like a virus running through my veins infecting every action.”
Something that I have learned is try to avoid starting off your piece explaining that you have looked up the topic and that’s what you are now writing about. Omitting this little bit will really polish up your piece.
11/03/24
Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate you taking the time.