The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done
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This is very clever in its conception. I really value it.
I did find the punctuation a little confusing and at times lacking, thus changing the emphasis of a super approach to the topic.
This is a lovely poem. You make some great points in this powerful poem. I did notice you used some form of persecute over ten times. It definitely makes it on topic, but sometimes the best entries that are on topic never use the topic word but show what it means. You have a great beginning and the ending brings it full circle.