The Official Writing Challenge
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Succinct and punching point. Well done.
Blessings
No wasted words.
Spot on. This would be a wonderful little thought prompt with a powerful punch.
This could make a great devotion. I like the verse at the beginning. Make sure you either put quotation marks around verses or for devotions you could put them in italics. Also make sure you start beginning of dialog with a capital and use question marks inside quotations when needed. I think if you added a prayer at the end, this would be a great devotion to submit for Faithwriters. You make a good point and have a clear message.