The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/06
A very, very beautiful work of art! My only suggestion is to break up the last stanza into two verses. Otherwise, a well written, and definitely well thought out piece! Thank you for sharing...loved it!
02/20/06
I agree with Marilyn that the last stanza could be divided into two, otherwise a very beautiful and well thought-out poem.