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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Good Samaritan (Luke 10:30-37) (02/22/24)
Hannah, the Enochian warrior princess has been summoned to a divine meeting in the heavenly courts where the Almighty Yehovah presides. Summarily, Hannah programs her destination quickly into her flaming chariot of fire. In the blink of an eye, powerful flames surged the chariot forward.

Hannah watches the earthly realm diminish as the spacecraft flies like a towering eagle, soaring high into the heavens. She understands only too well how the dark forces can manipulate seeds of deception that seek to destroy the Will of Yehovah. She is not overwhelmed by evil, but focuses her thoughts on the Holy One.

The flaming chariot of fire cautiously begins its descent, orbiting in circular formation, landing safely in the outer realm of the Kingdom.

Before Hannah can enter the kingdom, she will cross over the threshold. The door to the threshold is closed, sealed by the blood of the lamb on the lentil and the two side-posts. Exodus 12:22.

She whispers a prayer, “My heart longs to be with you, to behold your magnificence and to humbly stand in the Glory of your presence is my greatest delight.” She knocks at the door.

Yeshuah opens the door, allowing Hannah to enter. She steps over the threshold, crossing into the Kingdom of the Almighty Yehovah.

Yehovah made an everlasting covenant with Abraham, Isaac, Jacob and Moses and the Israelites. It has been almost 2000 years since Yeshuah was crucified, died and rose from the dead. Through the shedding of Yeshuah’s blood, he is similar to the Good Samaritan. He sacrificed His life to offers all believers the choice to step over the threshold to enter by faith from the natural to the spiritual dimension.
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Vince Martella
03/01/24
I think you did a good job with writing a creative story rather than just a Bible study. I think you could have included some more information that would have fleshed out the scene and character, and engaged the reader deeper. What was the meeting about? What was the background story on Hannah? Could you have developed a stronger tie in to the Good Samaritan in your story. These were some things I was left questioning. I would encourage you to use your full word count (you had over 450 words left) to develop your story as fully as possible. You are on the right track. Keep writing!