The Official Writing Challenge
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This is good. I love the descriptions Definitely on topic. It can use some polishing - punctuation, quotation marks, etc., but overall this was a very enjoyable read. I expect this will do well with the judges. Keep writing.
02/10/24
I enjoyed this entry very much. Double check your spelling especially in songs where it can change the meaning. Great job!
Congratulations on your 1st place win! I knew this one would do well. Keep on writing as you level up!