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This usage of reed is new to me. It makes sense, just unfamiliar. Good job giving us a different perspective.
03/05/23
I have just learned about this version of reed. Fascinating!
Yes, let's not be reedy week Christians!
Good Biblical advice~~~
You did a great job of writing on a fresh take of reed. You used read in the article too, so you did a nice job of writing on topic. You need to break the article down into smaller paragraphs. You quoted a lot of verses, but it might be better to focus on just one or two so not to overwhelm the reader. Another thing I noticed is how often you used the word reed or reedy. You gave us synonyms; I'd have loved to see you use those in the article. You make some great points and have a clear, Christian message.